1. You covered most of the required information in your presentation. 2. The volume of your recording was consistent. 3. You did an exceptional job explaining her role in theWhite House and her passion for comatting illiteracy. She continues that to this very day.
Weaknesses
1. You spoke way too fast. Slow down. 2. You didn’t say if she had any siblings. 3. You didn’t name all of her children. 4. You didn’t state how old she was when her husband became president.
Florian
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. You covered most of the required information in your presentation.
2. The volume of your recording was consistent.
3. You did an exceptional job explaining her role in theWhite House and her passion for comatting illiteracy. She continues that to this very day.
Weaknesses
1. You spoke way too fast. Slow down.
2. You didn’t say if she had any siblings.
3. You didn’t name all of her children.
4. You didn’t state how old she was when her husband became president.
Overall grade B 27/30